Authors should make Alice and Emmett real, non-wired, cognitive human beings.

Why does Bella has to be either a prude or horny slut (for lack of better description)

if their cum takes so sweet and smells so good, they should bottle it and sell!

Least of all, most stories need a conflict. Not all of them, but a climax is excential in many of them. For that reason, the climax should be something interesting and well thought of, not an idea used many times before nor something that should be looked at as something-that-needs-to-happen-so-everyone-can-go-back-to-their-typical-lives.

Just think about it.