Authors should make Alice and Emmett real, non-wired, cognitive human beings.

Why does Bella has to be either a prude or horny slut (for lack of better description)

if their cum takes so sweet and smells so good, they should bottle it and sell!

Least of all, most stories need a conflict. Not all of them, but a climax is excential in many of them. For that reason, the climax should be something interesting and well thought of, not an idea used many times before nor something that should be looked at as something-that-needs-to-happen-so-everyone-can-go-back-to-their-typical-lives.

Just think about it.

As for chapter titles, that varies. For Midnight Romeo, I’m using song titles that relate to the chapter. For instance, Bella thought she was being followed, so the chapter title was “I always feel like somebody’s watching me.” For Blue Jeans and Graphic Tees, it’s be a pair of something that relates to the chapter. An example? Bella will be milking cows and have trouble collecting eggs from the hens who run around like they’re heads are cut off, therefore the title would be “fresh milk and headless hens.”

If I knew how to send an e-mail/private message about this, I would, since I would never want to risk embarrassing anyone.

However, the above phrase, from PTB’s recent post about its new chapter status feature, cried out for a beta’s review, itself.

All the best.

RD